Prospecting for gold during the California gold rush was a relatively easy task, because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, and putting gold literally within reach of anybody with a pan or shovel.
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lee1991 2014-05-06 16:19:19
and 表并列，前文没有与putting并列的结构
qiyeran346 2014-10-03 18:08:55
because of cannot introduce a clause idioms: within reach of...
hesiuan 2015-12-12 15:33:56
because of A, B, and C that thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, and putting gold literally within reach of anybody putting 和 thrust时态不平行
Lottieeee 2016-08-30 18:07:36
Prospecting for gold during the California gold rush was a relatively easy task, because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, and putting gold literally within reach of anybody with a pan or shovel. there's nothing parallel to the boldface construction; "and" requires that there be some parallel construction earlier in the sentence.
瑞雪兆丰年 2016-07-14 22:44:53
because of后结构复杂，读者读起来有一种断了气还没读完的感觉;putting没有动作发出者
jessicachow 2016-02-01 15:04:08
and的并列，putting gold literally与前面的不是并列关系。
old4gaming 2015-09-08 15:06:50
because 后面不能太长，and putting的并列结构有问题
shisu0610041 2015-05-24 08:28:30
prehistoric glacier movement 和 erosion是并列成分，不是同位语
shisu0610041 2015-05-24 07:13:29
and 表并列，前文没有与putting并列的结构
勒戒世界 2014-12-19 15:02:07
because of后结构复杂，读者读起来有一种断了气还没读完的感觉;putting没有动作发出者。
