For members of the seventeenth-century Ashanti nation in Africa, animal-hide shields with wooden frames were essential items of military equipment, a method to protect warriors against enemy arrows and spears.
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尔淡浓 2014-11-14 11:11:11
a method 代指animal-hide shields 不恰当 这应该是一个物品而不是方式 而且shields是复数
CLAIRE513 2015-08-18 09:49:31
主句主语animal－hide shields不是一个method
jjxxbbmm1234 2014-01-19 16:20:01
画线部分a method的逻辑主语应该为animal-hide shields，说animal－hide shields with wooden frames是一个方法，不符合逻辑。一个方法应该是动作类的名词或者句子。语法上的主语为equipment，equipment为一个方法，更加不符合逻辑。
