语法 Sentence Correction-676

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In no other historical sighting did Halley's Comet cause such a worldwide sensation as did its return in 1910–1911.

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香蕉小姐 2015-05-04 12:16:58

Hally's Comet caused such a worldwide sensation in no other historical sighting as did its return of 1910-1912. 这里是Hally's Comet和its return比,错误。

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siasiasia 2016-04-13 19:09:37

比较的是介词词组

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狂暴的肉手君 2014-10-27 19:43:39

in historical sighting与选项中的in 1910-1911不平行

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jackshanhang 2016-10-22 02:44:14

that's not logically parallel enough. when you're talking about an event (historical sighting), that event should be placed in parallel with another event (its return). it's illogical to place an event in parallel with a year or date.

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SUNSHINE218 2016-08-04 15:46:12

an event of + 年份 : 所以可以说 in its return of 1910 这里省略了 a worldwide sensation 世界范围内的轰动 正确的是 HC caused such a worldwide sensation in no other historical sighting as a worldwide senstion in its return of 1910

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gjf1995315 2016-06-03 16:50:38

根据did来确定比较结构的话,A中是its return和Halley's Comet在比较,不合句意

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钥匙Eric 2016-05-21 21:29:28

时态过去时,主句却是现在时? 哈雷彗星引起世界瞩目在没有其他历史目击中, 像它的1910的返回那样引起世界瞩目 变成了 哈雷彗星引起瞩目VS哈雷彗星的1910年返回引起瞩目 感觉怪怪的?

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sujingyi5 2016-05-19 10:48:57

Parallelism; Verb form; Logical predication The single subject of this sentence is Halley’s Comet, and its single verb phrase is did cause. The comparison presented by the sentence is between adverbial phrases describing times when the comet was seen. Grammatically, the items being compared are parallel prepositional phrases beginning with the preposition in: in no other sighting and in its return in 1910–1911. This is the clearest, most economical way of presenting the information. The options that introduce a second verb (did or had) violate the parallelism and introduce a comparison between the comet itself (subject of the verb did cause) and the comet’s return (subject of the verb did or had). A This sentence implies a comparison between the comet and its return. B This sentence implies a comparison between the comet and its return; had is the wrong auxiliary verb form because it must be followed by caused instead of cause. C Correct. The parallel prepositional phrases in this sentence correctly compare times when the comet was sighted. D This sentence implies a comparison between the comet and its return. E This sentence violates parallelism, implying a comparison between a prepositional phrase and a noun phrase.

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金子0913 2016-04-28 18:52:40

比较对象错误,拿comet 和 its return对比了

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ypheroin 2015-12-06 11:13:54

是HC did in its return,而不是its return did,

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leelokwan 2015-10-18 12:16:25

句子应该是这样:Halley's comet did not cause such a worldwide sensation in other historical sighting as (a world wide sensation) in its return of 1910–1911 与in other historical sighting平行

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veravane 2015-10-18 10:55:51

原句可还原为Halley 's comet did cause(caused) such a worldwide sensation in no other historical sighting as in its return of 1910-1911.相当于状语的对比:in no other historical sighting和in its return of 1910-1911的对比,比较结构中的内容是:"such a worldwide sensation in no other historical sighting as in its return of 1910-1911",后面部分省略的是a world wide sensation。

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