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b/e的错误之处在于that/who定从的动作内容(即产生生理反应)认为是individual,实际则应emotional reactions
the person cannot create physiological responses. --- meaning change
who 不对
定语从句who修饰individual本身没错,但是定语从句后的内容出现语义上的错误,应该是emotional reactions创造出这种反应
creates unconscious physiological responses 的主语是 emtional reactions
create unconscious physiological responses的主语不可能是人
非限制性定语从句首先不能用that 其次这里面不应该是individual creates responses而是 reactions
以我的智商我就只能感觉出 错就错在 individual 应该是 give reaction,create用的不合适 而已
who指代了individual 逻辑意思错误
create physiological response 的并不是individual,而是emotional reaction
create physiological response 的并不是individual,而是emotional reaction
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