The stars are in motion like the planets, some of which at tremendous speeds are in motion but so far away from Earth that their apparent positions in the sky do not change enough for their movement to be observed during a single human lifetime.
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JQueen 2015-03-07 08:58:50
1. like the planets的位置，可以导致confusion，可以理解成in motion like the planets，或者the starts are like planets 2. some of which 指代不明，而且awkward 3. but 后面的句子没有主谓语 4. are in motion 居然重复了两次
ww58 2016-07-07 09:24:43
which要修饰stars，离得太远了
Jessicasisi 2015-02-03 14:30:39
which 指代planet 不是star所以错
shisu0610041 2017-01-05 14:39:08
ike the planets的位置，可以导致confusion，可以理解成in motion like the planets，或者the starts are like planets 2.
Jane890628 2016-09-28 03:02:38
but 封闭式平行结构，but后缺谓语动词
Jane890628 2016-09-28 03:02:31
but 封闭式平行结构，but后缺谓语动词
huiminzi1124 2016-04-17 22:37:00
like the planets的位置，可以导致confusion，可以理解成in motion like the planets，或者the starts are like planets 2. some of which 指代不明，而且awkward 3. but 后面的句子没有主谓语 4. are in motion 居然重复了两次
Egoyiyy 2016-03-05 15:25:00
which 指代错了， 本来逻辑上应该指代stars，这里却就近指代了planets. which是就近指代
huyingchuan 2016-02-29 08:17:15
E Placement of like the planets is awkward; some of which is awkward and ambiguous; are in motion is said twice; subject and verb of the second clause are omitted.
san_dra_1994 2015-09-10 09:30:23
like 的位置导致指代不清
moneysharon 2015-08-08 00:59:20
[ME]some of which??[正]1. like the planets的位置，可以导致confusion，可以理解成in motion like the planets，或者the starts are like planets 2. some of which 指代不明，而且awkward 3. but 后面的句子没有主谓语 4. are in motion 居然重复了两次
Irene九月九加油 2015-07-23 22:47:29
which不知道指代
