The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion just as the planets are, yet being so far away from Earth that their apparent positions in the sky do not change enough for their movement to be observed during a single human lifetime.
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ww58 2016-07-07 09:22:32
yet是连词，连词前是完整句子，后面也应该是完整句子
hoper 2016-05-01 13:32:53
1.具体内容上，at tremendous speed本身就是描述in motion的状况的， 先写in motion 再描述如何运动更符合逻辑... 【Stars move at a fast speed】这样，而不是【Stars ,at a fast speed,move.不合理！】 2.主要内容是说stars，A中间被插入语just as the planets are打断了（本来已经有了一个插入语打断了主谓stars与 are in motion，不好），而后面又是继续讲star。 感觉B更连贯，前面简洁三个词表明比较，后面全部讲stars.A. In this case, the original sentence is not correct, for several different reasons. Since “at tremendous speeds” refers to the way that the stars are in motion, this modifier has to come at the end of that phrase to make sense. “Some of them at tremendous speeds” is something called an absolute phrase. An absolute phrase is a noun phrase that is almost exactly like an appositive, only it doesn’t modify a particular noun; it modifies the ENTIRE previous clause. If this phrase were an appositive, then placing it after “the stars” would be correct. However, because it is an absolute phrase, it needs to come at the beginning or the end of the clause that it modifies, not right in the middle of it. This sentence is also a fragment because “yet” is a coordinating conjunction and must be followed by an independent clause, but in this case it is followed by the participial phrase “being so far away from Earth.” Therefore, answer choice A is incorrect.
sailsweek 2014-04-11 08:55:47
yet之后应该跟一个句子，原句中没有谓语
yalisos 2016-11-13 18:58:58
yet之后应该跟一个句子，原句中没有谓语。 at tremendous speed要用at
Monicca 2016-11-10 16:16:16
这里应该先讲motion再讲at tremendous speed
w东东弗斯 2016-10-05 23:11:38
yet是连词要加完整的句子
w东东弗斯 2016-10-05 23:11:36
yet是连词要加完整的句子
Jane890628 2016-09-28 02:57:07
yet 是副词，不能连接句子
meiyouyhm 2016-09-22 23:35:37
1。“some of them at tremendous speeds”，是独立主格而不是同位语，独立主格只能放在句首或句末，而不是句子中间 2.yet做连词，要跟完整分句，原句无谓语
misakigongyi 2016-09-18 12:59:13
yet 后面加句子
feizhutou 2016-09-13 10:20:18
应该先强调in motion再说 speed yet（连词）之后要跟一个完整的句子 而是分词作状语 yet两种用法,1.句子yet句子 、2.adj+yet+adj 后面半句是so...that句型 必须是一个完整的句子，
gjf1995315 2016-06-04 21:19:20
being多余
