Cash flows to stock and bond mutual funds have gained strength in the last two months, but fund managers were not eager at investing the new money, instead of preferring to raise the cash levels in their portifolios tothe new level in six months.
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Cherry00721 2014-06-26 11:23:58
时态错误啊亲！！
karenning 2016-06-21 20:52:02
- parallelism for present perfect tense; "in the last two months"
Rae_Chan 2015-04-14 21:25:09
从平行的角度来说，but后句子的时态应该和前面并列相同；从句意来看，是说股票和共同基金的现金流在过去两个月走强，但是基金经理还没有很强的意愿去投入新一轮资金，取而代之的是更倾向于在未来6个月将投资组合的现金比例抬高到新的水平。可以看出基金经理的这个决定对现在是产生影响的，因此应该用完成时
喵了个叽 2015-05-28 21:29:36
instead doing sth 强调后半部分 raise to 理解对比的句意
