Noting that the Federal Reserve had raised a key short-term interest rate again last month, analysts said that they expected orders for durable goods to decline soon because a rise in interest rates makes it more expensive for them to be bought on credit
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恬恬会更强 2016-03-30 09:51:56
一句话里代词they/them必须指代同一个事物。 前面已经出现they了，这个them 和 they 应该指的同一个东西。 or them to be bought on credit 不简洁，被动语态不好；从意合角度讲rising IRs比a rise in IRs 好 rising：adj，上升的
ppj 2015-01-16 17:33:10
一句话里代词they/them必须指代同一个事物。 前面已经出现they了，这个them 和 they 应该指的同一个东西。所以排除A和E 另外makes it more expensive for them to be bough这种表达也很awkward
Queeniebaby 2016-09-16 17:25:35
them 有歧义，是修饰orders 还是goods？被动不及主动好
励志yy 2016-11-12 12:28:50
b、e语法都正确，但e比较wordy。 if the __ing phrase is reasonably small (like "buying on credit"), then the version without "it" is better (from a stylistic standpoint) because it's more efficient / less wordy. on the other hand, if the __ing phrase is long, then the less wordy construction becomes impossible.
CelesteTOEFL 2016-09-18 13:05:22
这个for them只能指代analysts,语义错误。
CelesteTOEFL 2016-09-13 20:09:55
对他们来讲，被买太贵。一般来说不合逻辑。 应该是对别人来讲，买他们很贵。
Vega要考GMAT 2016-04-08 13:59:45
for them to be bought on credit 太繁，不简洁
Alicia_939393 2016-02-14 23:44:09
1.them和未划线的they指代不一致 2.用被动不优
lkid 2015-09-27 00:57:49
一句话里代词they/them必须指代同一个事物。 前面已经出现they了，这个them 和 they 应该指的同一个东西。 or them to be bought on credit 不简洁，被动语态不好；从意合角度讲rising IRs比a rise in IRs 好 rising：adj，上升的
Letitia啊小啦 2015-03-24 01:26:33
根据前文的again，判断rising interest比a rise好，不止一次
