Often major economic shifts are so gradual that they are unable to be distinguished at first from ordinary fluctuations in the financial markets.
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ColdSheldon 2016-10-10 22:32:39
From Ron 不优的原因 1比Awordy 2 【economics shifts】 actually don't have the ability to distinguish it doesn't make sense.
fishanne 2016-01-13 15:16:25
"they" refers to "economic shifts " able/ unable to be done 的结构， wordy & awkward 逻辑语意上： economic shifts 不是distinguish的主语。 able /unable 本来就是主动意向，与被动混用，错误。 i also find something a bit awkward about the use of "unable" to describe something that's not actually an inability of the subject. here's what i mean: this plant is unable to perform photosynthesis. legitimate, because this actually describes an inability of the plant itself. this sentence: they (= major economic shifts) are unable to be distinguished... i don't like this, because we're not actually talking about an "inability" possessed by the economic shifts themselves. if we'd said something like "economic shifts are unable to destroy your equity", then i'd find that more appealing.
Williamwy 2015-08-12 21:30:43
the sentence changes the main character.
ChessyG 2016-11-27 09:59:19
C. able/unable to be done的结构wordy & awkward(C选项的从句把重心偷转到了"讨论economic shifts有没有被识别这个能力"，而合理的含义重心是"我们能否识别economic shifts") 我： 看来不仅是简洁的issue,语义才是最重要的判别
励志yy 2016-11-12 11:00:13
把重心偷转到了"讨论economic shifts有没有被识别这个能力"，而合理的含义重心是"我们能否识别economic shifts"
Hellosaaama 2016-10-29 20:59:53
able /unable 本来就是主动意向，与被动混用，错误。
Hellosaaama 2016-10-29 20:58:44
被动语态的执行主语不明；强调重心转变
CelesteTOEFL 2016-09-13 19:54:27
把句子的中心转化为了unable to be distinguished, 强调有没有被识别的能力。而且从简洁程度来说也不如A。
danislj1227126 2016-06-30 02:49:17
are able to be distinguished会理解成major economic shifts有能力被辨别，award
huiminzi1124 2016-06-23 11:37:32
so+ adj. +as to + v. 是比较标准的 不要排除 但注意逻辑主语一致 so that 不用考虑逻辑主语 be unable to be done很wordy
恬恬会更强 2016-03-30 09:16:09
so+ adj. +as to + v. 是比较标准的 不要排除 但注意逻辑主语一致 so that 不用考虑逻辑主语 be unable to be done很weird 为什么没感觉出来·····
xiaobaitu 2016-02-18 11:43:18
able/unable to be done的结构wordy & awkward(C选项的从句把重心偷转到了"讨论economic shifts有没有被识别这个能力"，而合理的含义重心是"我们能否识别economic shifts")
