A report by the American Academy for the Advancement of Science has concluded that many of the dioxins that are currently uncontrolled and North Americans are exposed to come from the incineration of wastes.
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小灰灰 2014-03-30 12:41:59
that are currently uncontrolled经典啰嗦结构直接用currently uncontrolled作定语；the dioxins that are currently uncontrolled and (that) North Americans are exposed to come 主语不同（that充当的成分不同），that不能省略；一般定从末尾有介词to,提到代词前，一般以 to which ,in which形式出现
ccorange2004 2014-01-28 12:29:54
主语不同的时候that不能省略
Heyiii 2015-09-12 19:36:25
that are..... is wordy，North Americans are exposed to come应该和and前面的分句平行，改为that North Americans are exposed to come
feizhutou 2016-09-20 10:54:22
many of the dioxins that are currently uncontrolled 不如 many of the currently uncontrolled dioxins 好 and 连接 主语不同 that不能省略 反正原文意思不同不能并列
邢小安 2016-07-14 11:05:04
awkward
annie654 2016-05-07 13:33:02
that are表述不好。后面的that不能省因为是定语从句
Ivycoco 2016-03-24 09:21:56
that are currently uncontrolled经典啰嗦结构直接用currently uncontrolled作定语；the dioxins that are currently uncontrolled and (that) North Americans are exposed to come 主语不同（that充当的成分不同），that不能省略；一般定从末尾有介词to，提到代词前，一般以 to which，in which形式出现。
大毅姑娘 2016-01-31 23:47:55
一般定从末尾有介词to, 提到代词前，以 to which /in which形式出现; 不能用that引导然后把to放到句末；
GHann 2015-12-22 23:25:06
dioxins countable noun that are currently uncontrolled-currently uncontrolled that are currently uncontrolled and (that) North Americans are exposed to 这里的两个that分别是从句的主语和宾语，充当的成分不同，所以第二个that不能省
Susie_yan 2015-10-04 19:01:17
原文意思结构不是并列， 错
iampizza 2015-09-04 15:46:07
定语从句中主语不同时 that不可省
酱子 2015-08-18 23:54:48
［从句平行结构／不简洁］1、many of the dioxins that are…. and that are…. 才能平行 2、 currently uncontrolled dioxins就可以了 不需要用从句 啰嗦
