语法 Sentence Correction-3750

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According to one expert, it is not so much the cause of genetic irregularities in many breeds of dog to be bred for looks or to meet other narrow criteria as that the breeds have relatively few founding members.

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时光老人 2015-12-29 10:18:09

not so much that...才能与as that平行

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北土 2014-07-30 21:18:09

first, check out my post above regarding the parallelism here. second, remember to take into account the message that the sentence is trying to convey. this sentence is saying, in essence, that the cause of a certain phenomenon is not x, but rather y. in order to convey that idea accurately, the sentence needs to have a form that actually says THE CAUSE IS x RATHER THAN y (or some other wording that is equivalent to this). if the entire parallel structure starts off with “it is not the cause…”, then, taken literally (as it must be), this wording suggests that the entire discussion revolves around what is not the cause. that would be bad.

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尔淡浓 2014-08-01 17:03:29

...not so much that...as that...

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要考满分的晚琳儿 2016-10-26 21:37:39

补充:to be bred for looks和 to meet other criteria逻辑意思也不平行

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要考满分的晚琳儿 2016-10-26 21:36:28

1、it引导的从句语法错误 2、not so much that...as that

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cloudyl 2016-01-19 14:37:46

to be bred for looks 和 to meet certain criteria 逻辑上不平行

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BobZ 2015-12-15 17:24:18

it表语从句用法错误;to be bred和to meet逻辑上不平行;not so much that…搭配不完整。

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lkid 2015-10-04 23:41:05

it表语从句用法错误; to be bred和to meet形式上虽然平行逻辑上不平行; not so much that…搭配不完整

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荔馨 2015-06-07 13:18:02

it表语从句用法错误;to be bred和to meet逻辑上不平行;not so much that…搭配不完整。

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Benwant700 2014-08-28 18:47:49

it表语从句用法错误; to be bred和to meet形式上虽然平行逻辑上不平行; not so much that…搭配不完整

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WickyGmat 2014-08-07 17:12:41

不要看见平行就选,分析一下形式上虽然平行,但是逻辑上是否依旧平行。这句话to be bred和to meet平行,其实逻辑上是不平行的///然后就是so much that...as that...的问题

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