The new image of Stone Age people as systematic hunters of large animals, rather than as merely scavenging for meat, have emerged from examining tools found in Germany, which include three wooden spears that archaeologists believe to be about 400,000 years old.
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liqijie3242656 2014-08-03 18:35:43
scavenging for meat不与hunters of large animals平行; 主语是image谓语动词要用单数has; which只指代前面的名词，指代错误； emerge from都应该用表结果的名词examation，而不是表状态的动名词
陈圈圈o_O 2014-11-20 14:16:41
不平行，has emerged，which指代不明
陈圈圈o_O 2014-11-21 06:26:36
has emerged，from+n.表结果，+doing表状态
