Scientists believe that unlike the males of most species of moth, the male whistling moths of Nambung, Australia, call female moths to them using acoustical signals, but not olfactory ones, and attracting their mates during the day, rather than at night.
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SharonUSA 2015-07-09 14:57:22
题目说了这个物种的两个特质：call异性的方式和时间，因此两个特质要用and连接，前后一致（call对应attract）
viola940515 2015-10-12 22:06:22
句子结构：Scientists believe that…, … male moths… call female moths… using…, rather than…, and attract their mates...
亦又制造 2014-10-11 08:30:22
看下句子意思的好吗
停不下来的雕兄 2016-12-23 20:20:37
in fact, it's "but..." that's problematic here. see, "but" implies a contrast. if X but not Y has a contrast, then that would imply that X and Y usually go together. E.g., At the event, I saw Jake but not his wife. --> This sentence only makes sense if I would normally expect to see Jake's wife by his side. In this sentence, there's no reason to expect that acoustic signals would be accompanied by olfactory ones"”in fact, we would probably expect the opposite, that there would just be one or the other"”so "but" doesn't really make sense.
金子0913 2016-07-20 23:56:07
平行一定要看句意，而且不是只看结构，此处attract 应该跟call 平行，而不是using
恬恬会更强 2016-03-31 20:01:59
attract应该和call平行，语义要符合啊！如果是attracting的话就是和using平行了，这样变成了call female moths to them attracting their mates语义不通啊！！！ 考的时候注意了，但时间不允许，就没细想。。。大忌啊！！！
lingdeling 2016-01-10 18:08:46
attract应该和call平行，语义要符合啊！如果是attracting的话就是和using平行了，这样变成了call female moths to them attracting their mates语义不通啊！！！ 考的时候注意了，但时间不允许，就没细想。。。大忌啊！！！
ypheroin 2015-12-09 21:00:24
1. 从句意上using 与 attracting的平行不合理。 2. but not如果换成rather than，与后面的rather than at night平行的更工整
