The success of the program to eradicate smallpox has stimulated experts to pursue what they had not previously considered possible--better control, if not eradication, of the other infections such as measles and yaws.
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Cheriez 2015-09-02 09:49:40
There are 2 problems with A. - Major problem is "THE other infections." THE is too definitive here, carrying the connotation of "every single one of the other infections." * THE is also incompatible with "such as": - Correct: I never read this book, but I read the other books on the shelf. - Correct: I never read this book, but I read other books on the shelf, such as "Right Hand, Left Hand" and "The Rise and Fall of the Third Reich." - Incorrect: I never read this book, but I read the other books on the shelf, such as "Right Hand, Left Hand" and "The Rise and Fall of the Third Reich." - Minor problem is "what they had not..." vs. "something they had not..." The "what" construction is awfully strong, suggesting that this was THE ONE THING they hadn't thought possible. * As an analogy, compare the meanings of "I want to do what I love for a living" and "I want to do something I love for a living." The first suggests that the speaker has one particular field in mind; the second doesn't.
六之风 2013-11-14 18:33:07
the other错误
六之风 2013-11-17 20:09:56
something that 和what都可。the other 不合适。
停不下来的雕兄 2016-12-23 19:17:08
There are 2 problems with A. - Major problem is "THE other infections." THE is too definitive here, carrying the connotation of "every single one of the other infections." * THE is also incompatible with "such as": - Correct: I never read this book, but I read the other books on the shelf. - Correct: I never read this book, but I read other books on the shelf, such as "Right Hand, Left Hand" and "The Rise and Fall of the Third Reich." - Incorrect: I never read this book, but I read the other books on the shelf, such as "Right Hand, Left Hand" and "The Rise and Fall of the Third Reich." - Minor problem is "what they had not..." vs. "something they had not..." The "what" construction is awfully strong, suggesting that this was THE ONE THING they hadn't thought possible. * As an analogy, compare the meanings of "I want to do what I love for a living" and "I want to do something I love for a living." The first suggests that the speaker has one particular field in mind; the second doesn't.
许栩 2016-11-12 16:02:06
something 代替名词从句，简洁 the other 使用不当，应该是other
Hellosaaama 2016-10-30 16:48:12
"the other"
shisu0610041 2016-09-21 17:39:47
There are 2 problems with A. - Major problem is "THE other infections." THE is too definitive here, carrying the connotation of "every single one of the other infections." * THE is also incompatible with "such as": - Correct: I never read this book, but I read the other books on the shelf. - Correct: I never read this book, but I read other books on the shelf, such as "Right Hand, Left
josie_dong 2016-08-25 17:07:29
what没有指代
Walter912 2016-08-11 21:04:45
主要问题：the other 不能和such as 连用 what 引导的从句语气太过绝对，具有唯一性的意味 As an analogy, compare the meanings of "I want to do what I love for a living" and "I want to do something I love for a living." The first suggests that the speaker has one particular field in mind; the second doesn't.
jessicachow 2016-05-17 17:08:09
the other后不能跟such as.举例：-Correct: I never read this book, but I read other books on the shelf, such as "Right Hand, Left Hand" and "The Rise and Fall of the Third Reich." - Incorrect: I never read this book, but I read the other books on the shelf, such as "Right Hand, Left Hand" and "The Rise and Fall of the Third Reich."
Evelyn811 2016-05-17 10:32:45
the other前面部分对应的结构缺失，原文也不存在说other infections的意思，还是such infections as..较为简洁
annie654 2016-05-15 16:16:58
1.one...the other...后面只能跟一个，所以用such as不合适。2. Minor problem is "what they had not..." vs. "something they had not..." The "what" construction is awfully strong, suggesting that this was THE ONE THING they hadn't thought possible. * As an analogy, compare the meanings of "I want to do what I love for a living" and "I want to do something I love for a living." The first suggests that the speaker has one particular field in mind; the second doesn't.
纯洁小吹吹吹 2016-05-08 14:49:46
the other 错
