Nine months after the county banned jet skis and other water bikes from the tranquil waters of Puget Sound, a judge overturned the ban on the ground of violating state laws for allowing the use of personal watercraft on common waterways.
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pitany 2015-07-09 10:30:48
句子结构：Nice months after the county banned…, a judge overturned the ban on the ground that… After引导时间状语从句，主句主语是judge，谓语是overturned，宾语是ban，on the ground that…介 词短语作状语，that引导同位语从句解释ground。 考点：逻辑表达、习惯用语 1) 逻辑表达，修饰名词时常用分词或that从句作定语，一般不用不定式，因为不定式通常用来作状 语表示目的，其逻辑主语可能是句子主语，容易产生修饰歧义；用在法律等的修饰上，分词结构 比定语从句更能表达出状态的含义。 2) 习惯用语-on the ground(s)的两种常见用法： on the ground(s) that…: if you do sth on the grounds of a particular thing, that thing is the reason for your action. The court overturned that decision on the grounds that the Prosecution has withheld crucial evidence. on the ground(s) of +noun. Owen was against it, on the grounds of expense. (A) for allowing表达方式错误，其逻辑主语有a judge的嫌疑，而原句allow…应该作laws的后置定语； on the ground后跟of+名词或者that从句，不能跟of doing。 (B) their 没有指代对象；to allow 表示目的，其逻辑主语有 a judge 的嫌疑，而原句 allow…是 laws 的定语；on the ground of their violating 表达方式错误。 (C) violate应该用过去时态。 (D) 正确，that引导同位语从句，现在分词结构allowing作后置定语修饰名词laws。 (E) 被动语态表达不清晰；allowing距离其修饰对象laws太远，产生歧义。
Yeezy 2014-07-28 10:04:24
for allowing表达方式错误，其逻辑主语有a judge的嫌疑，而原句allow…应该作laws的后置定语;on the ground后跟of+名词或者that从句，不能跟of doing。
王eee_q 2014-07-31 02:27:11
for allowing有修饰主句主语的嫌疑
停不下来的雕兄 2016-12-23 17:59:39
* unidiomatic: you can't write "on the grounds OF _____". you should use that. * there's also no pronoun, or any other reference, to indicate what violated the state laws. (you might not notice this sort of thing in a standalone sentence, because the meaning is pretty obvious, but note the contrast with choices (b), (c), and (d), all of which do contain appropriate references.)
honeydew 2016-09-28 16:54:13
习惯用语-on the ground(s)的两种常见用法： on the ground(s) that… on the ground(s) of +noun.
ocean09960802 2016-05-27 14:20:29
for allowing表达方式错误，其逻辑主语有a judge的嫌疑，而原句allow…应该作laws的后置定语;on the ground后跟of+名词或者that从句，不能跟of doing。
anne_yu 2016-05-07 13:21:35
固定搭配： on the ground(s) of noun / on the ground(s) that... X on the ground of doing for allowing 逻辑主语有a judge 而不是laws 的嫌疑，所以有歧义
allenzeng 2016-04-19 22:35:22
1.on the ground of sth or that，不能接v-ing机构；for allowing的主语不明确，有修饰a judge的嫌疑。
siasiasia 2016-04-15 12:26:21
of doing不好；law法律法规之后要用doing
克村 2016-04-07 18:58:16
for allowing 的逻辑主语不清楚可能是judge
fishanne 2016-01-15 15:50:25
1.on the ground 后跟of+名词，或者that从句，不能跟of doing；2. for allowing主语有judge的歧义。
viola940515 2015-10-10 21:08:57
for allowing表达方式错误，其逻辑主语有a judge的嫌疑，而原句allow…应该作laws的后置定语;on the ground后跟of+名词或者that从句，不能跟of doing。
Leozhong 2015-08-18 18:11:27
on the ground后跟of+名词或者that从句，不能跟of doing。
