Researchers have determined that, because of being poached and increased cultivation in their native habitats, there are fewer than 100 Arabian leopards left in the wild, thus making them many more times as rare as China's giant pandas.
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ppj 2015-01-16 11:56:13
making。。。。。这个状语修饰对象不清楚，many more times不对
wjp 2014-11-12 19:52:20
making修饰对象不清楚，many more错误的
Queeniebaby 2016-09-16 16:49:41
their 指代 researchers;them 指代leopards
Monicca 2016-11-21 20:56:02
X times more adj than X times as adj as
misakigongyi 2016-11-18 17:08:10
thus making会修饰主句，不配
ColdSheldon 2016-10-11 09:06:40
两个错误 because of A and B 平行 being pached 和 increased cultivation 显然词性不同 错误2 many more times as rare as 错 这里more多余 X times more adj than 对 X times as adj as 对
CelesteTOEFL 2016-09-18 13:27:36
being poached和increased cultivation不平行。
tina885386121 2016-01-28 10:52:54
because of +名词
ypheroin 2016-01-05 11:40:47
1. making 的逻辑主语 2. many more times as rare as, 明显是把more than和as as 结构混在一起用
veravane 2015-11-08 15:02:53
making 歧义，修饰对象不清楚 more多余
vickiaro 2015-11-07 11:06:36
1）many more times as rare as中more多余。 2）because of being poached and increased cultivation，being多余。 3）这里making修饰的是主句的主语或者主句的整个句子，不论意义和逻辑都不符合。不是研究者导致猎豹变得稀有，也不是研究者determine sth导致它稀有。
Estaaa 2015-10-27 23:06:44
many times more 而不是many more times； making指代不清；
