One automobile manufacturer has announced plans to increase the average fuel efficiency of its sport utility vehicles by 25 percent over the next five years, which is an increase amounting to roughly five miles per gallon, representing the first significant change in the fuel efficiency of any class of passenger vehicle in almost two decades.
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wjp 2014-11-06 17:21:16
多个修饰成分在修饰相同的对象时，之间要加上连词，否则会导致修饰歧义，所以 representing前面要加上and
ppj 2015-01-16 11:40:00
which 指代不明，且分词结构representing的修饰对象不清楚
ypheroin 2016-01-05 11:26:11
which 指代有问题， representing 的逻辑主语是谁？
annie654 2016-05-04 10:08:25
which非限定定语从句修饰对象不正确，离increase太远；representing逻辑主语不清。
martinachoi 2016-01-02 15:53:06
which 指代不明，且分词结构representing的修饰对象不清楚
