In addition to her work on the Miocene hominid fossil record, Mary Leakey's contributions to archaeology include her discovering the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstaking documentation of East African cave paintings.
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时光老人 2015-12-29 12:51:33
discovering和documentation不对称
gloria熊 2015-05-14 15:51:04
首先注意in addition to A,B...AB不需要是同类事物！ 其次her discovering用法错误 有名次要用名词不用doing
nicolexzs 2014-10-21 23:29:42
名词's contributions形式不如动词更能表达原句意思。
zzv 2016-08-15 21:16:39
discovering和documentation不平行
晴天157雨天 2014-08-12 23:49:43
动名词her discovering与and后面的名词形式painstaking documentation不平行
