语法 Sentence Correction-3206

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Archaeologists in Egypt have excavated a 5,000-year-old wooden hull that is the earliest surviving example of a "built" boat--in other words, a boat constructed out of planks fitted together--and that thus represents a major advance, in terms of boat-building technology, over the dugout logs and reed vessels of more ancient vintage.

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Xu_John 2014-05-25 13:25:13

that is ...that represents,前后平行

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小灰灰 2014-04-06 14:50:37

去掉插入语后句子结构是a hull that is ....and that thus represents....两个限制性定语从句构成并列,这里因为两个句子的逻辑是因果关系,所以用thus修饰represent

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cmcm180 2014-10-30 12:46:11

that与前面that 平行 thus副词,无本质意思

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又是羊 2016-11-15 04:21:32

that represents 和 that is the...平行

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糯米团子QUQ 2016-11-04 15:54:30

that is… and that thus represents限定性定语从句的并列,同时修饰a 5,000-year-old wooden hull, 由于该并列结构存在着因果关系,因此添加副词thus修饰represents表明该逻辑关系

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senyu110 2016-10-13 22:28:10

逻辑清晰,thus that is 和 that represents平行

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anni9364 2016-10-07 21:21:01

The long dash is used to indicate an example or an aside. Only the example or aside goes inside the dash, so that example either has to go all the way to the end of the sentence or we need to "close" the dash at some point by putting a second one in. In this case, the "in other words" text only applies to the "built boat" concept, so I want to "close" the dash when I'm done talking about it.

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yyyyaaaa 2016-10-04 11:45:40

A:that is… and that thus represents限定性定语从句的并列, 两个that同时修饰a 5,000-year-old wooden hull, 由于该并列结构存在着因果关系,因此添加副词thus修饰represents表明该逻辑关系

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yaomaczhang 2016-09-24 05:10:57

平行,that is, that represents, 去掉破折号

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shisu0610041 2016-09-14 22:37:02

, that is… and that thus represents限定性定语从句的并列,同时修饰a 5,000-year-old wooden hull, 由于该并列结构存在着因果关系,因此添加副词thus修饰represents表明该逻辑关系

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danislj1227126 2016-09-14 21:19:11

and并列两个that从句

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feizhutou 2016-09-13 09:19:24

a hull that is ... a boat and that represents...

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CelesteTOEFL 2016-09-10 16:17:15

不容易发现的平行结构

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