An international team of astronomers is working at telescopes in the Canary Islands and Spain, having detected at least 18 huge gas spheres that are estimated at 5 to 15 times the mass of Jupiter, the solar system's largest planet.
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Port1a 2016-12-07 21:08:39
estimated at 错误
meilinliu 2014-07-01 18:01:45
that are 句意不简洁 estimated at错 is working 改变句子重心
恬恬会更强 2016-03-30 09:04:53
that are 句意不简洁 estimated at错 is working 改变句子重心
ColdSheldon 2016-10-07 21:53:40
改变了句子的重心，working 应该是修饰宇航员，重心是has detected 其二 同位语要修饰 这个点没发现
LM檬先森。 2016-06-01 19:46:58
(C) 更改了原句的意思working本来是修饰成分,用来修饰astronomers,在这里变成了句子的谓语,has detected本来是原句的谓语动词,在该选项中做修饰成分,变成了附属结构; spheres that are estimated at 5 to 15 times结构复杂,that are可以去掉; gas spheres和the mass of Jupiter不对应,无法进行比较
nasausa 2016-05-19 20:36:17
estimated to be/have
ypheroin 2015-12-26 19:40:19
1. 句子的主要成分从has detected变成了working at telescope，改变句意 2. that are estimated 结构啰嗦，可以直接用过去分词表示 3. gas sphere 不能与mass 比较
seline_lover 2015-10-31 10:52:41
that are estimated罗嗦；estimated at 5 to 15 times 应该是estimated to be/have；将原句中的修饰成分与谓语进行变换，改变了原文强调的重心。
nicolexzs 2014-10-18 13:16:33
that are estimated啰嗦；estimated at 5 to 15 times 应该是estimated to be/have；将原句中的修饰成分working与谓语has detected进行变换，改变了原文强调的重心和逻辑关系。
nicolexzs 2014-10-18 13:16:33
that are estimated啰嗦；estimated at 5 to 15 times 应该是estimated to be/have；将原句中的修饰成分working与谓语has detected进行变换，改变了原文强调的重心和逻辑关系。
Benwant700 2014-09-21 15:55:34
一宗罪：改变重心不忠实；二宗罪：that are 不简洁；三宗罪：estimate的正确用法，，estimated to be/have
