In 1945, after a career as First Lady in which she shattered expectations with an audacity never matched in the case of Abigail Adams or Dolly Madison, President Harry S Truman had Eleanor Roosevelt appointed as a delegate to the United Nations General Assembly.
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cocowu 2014-07-22 20:06:58
in the case of is wordy ! appointed as is wrong, be appointed "position" ! had appointed is wrong tense.
seline_lover 2015-10-31 10:39:31
never matched in the case of Abigail Adams or Dolly Madison结构表达复杂; President Harry S Truman作为after a career as First Lady的逻辑主语,不符合逻辑.
