In the major cities of industrialized countries at the end of the nineteenth century, important public places such as theaters, restaurants, shops, and banks had installed electric lighting, but there were less than one percent of homes with electricity, where lighting was still being provided mainly by candles or gas.
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ypheroin 2015-12-26 16:51:08
1. 该句的意思变为“有电的房子中的百分之一” 2. where 就近可能修饰electricity （不能用where引导定语从句修饰electricity，要用in which） 3. being provided 中的being多余
ppj 2015-01-13 21:33:48
, where lighting was still being provided没有语境体现出要用过去进行时，一般过去时就足够了
chuster 2016-05-25 19:56:04
less than 应该改成fewer than.表示不到1%的家庭。
