The cottontail rabbit population in Orange County, California, has increased unchecked in recent years as a result of the removal of the native fox population and the clearing of surrounding woodlands.
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elena_lee 2014-05-22 23:33:33
the removal of 和the clearing of 并列，因为remove有名词形式，不需要用动名词表示。
lyqsunny 2014-06-26 00:28:25
考点: 有效用词(Diction) 1) 介词短语:on account of, because of, despite (in despite of), as a result of之后只跟简单的名词短语。若其后面跟的是动名词或名词所有格+动名词短语(sb’s doing),或名词短语之后用一复杂的现在分词来修饰时,应改为与其相同意义的连词because, although等引导的从句形式。 2) 动词有自己的名词形式时,就不要用the +动词ing形式来表达其名词形式 3) which不能指代整个句子
华筝之韵 2017-01-02 18:33:40
as a result of 后面要加名字 remove的名词形式是removal, removal 可以和clearing平行，不一定两个都要ing形式
图法法图a 2016-12-04 20:43:52
As a result of 后跟啷个名词结构 简洁 Removal是名词不是形容词 题外话，GMAC出题不会傻到拿形容词来考吧，这种时候是否是一种trick来让词汇没有积累够的你以为这是形容词 ，选择形式上看着一样的 removing,以后留心
Henryhao 2016-11-18 19:46:39
正确，the removal of 和后面的the clearing of平行
Monicca 2016-11-14 21:57:14
平行结构：我拜托你记住，名词是不可以和动名词并列，但是动名词加上the就变成了名词，这时候就可以和名词平行了
励志yy 2016-11-06 19:50:38
Ron: 1.removal is better than removing. there are a bunch of words like these, with specific noun forms that, simply because they exist, are considered better than the corresponding gerund (-ing) forms. notable among this class of nouns are the '-al' forms, like removal, betrayal, etc. the closest i can get to a general rule is this: if a special noun form exists, use it. if not, use the -ing form. you wouldn't want 'removing' because removal is a better substitute. clearing, though, is fine because there's no specially designated noun form for that one. 2.you can't use 'resulting from' as an adverbial modifier, as is done here. in general, 'resulting from' is only used as an adjective modifier, almost always without a comma, as in the pollution resulting from the chemical spill forced all the local residents to evacuate.
queenkat 2016-10-25 17:08:17
clear没有名词形式 所以用clearing 来看作名词形式 而remove有名词形式 就用removal
shisu0610041 2016-09-18 18:17:15
严格的平行考法
CelesteTOEFL 2016-09-18 17:07:48
clearing 是名词，表示林中空地。
IAMBACK 2016-05-30 11:53:14
介词短语:on account of, because of, despite (in despite of), as a result of之后只跟简单的名词短 语。若其后面跟的是动名词或名词所有格+动名词短语(sb’s doing),或名词短语之后用一复杂的现在分 词来修饰时,应改为与其相同意义的连词because, although等引导的从句形式。
kristy16s 2016-05-18 06:07:19
clearing，名词，是“空地”的意思，不是清除。 removal，名词，是“拔除”的意思，与动名词removal不同。 动名词与名词不能平行，，要来多少遍~~~才记得
