Mideast immigrants are exhibiting rates of entrepreneurship exceeding virtually every other immigrant group in the increasingly diverse United States economy.
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emxiaobaocai 2015-10-30 11:22:29
rates of entrepreneurship不能与other immigrant group 进行对比
励志yy 2016-11-06 15:28:50
"exceeding" modifies "rates of en..",so it is comparing rates with groups
passerbyv 2015-12-04 14:17:20
mideast immigrants错误，只能说Immigrants from Mideast
tina885386121 2016-01-30 09:59:44
rates of entrepreneurship exceeding virtually every other immigrant group,其中，exceeding 修饰rates of entrepreneurship。所以是这两者相比较而不是和Immigrants比较
ypheroin 2015-12-22 20:06:44
exceeding的逻辑主语是rates of entrepreneurship，显然不能与other immigrant group比较
WinnieLee1 2015-12-20 17:38:02
rates exceeding other group 怀疑是正确的！！！！！
lyf0420 2015-12-01 18:42:15
语法--exceeding前后不对称,比较的是rates
gloria熊 2015-10-02 11:22:49
【比较】 看清楚比较对象是rates!
cuechi2002 2015-05-26 15:38:35
"exceeding virtually every other immigrant group" is written as a modifier that is modifying "rates of entrepreneurship". therefore, you have a comparison between rates on the one hand and immigrant groups on the other hand -- a nonsense comparison.
JennyFeng1987 2015-05-14 22:55:06
比较对象不对等，是将rates和every other immigrant group比较；现在完成时没有理由
