The Sports Medicine Programs of the Olympic Training Center, a complex where final tryouts are held for athletes representing the United States in the Olympics, are geared toward the enhancement of athletes' performance and toward preparing them for international competition.
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cantebury 2015-09-23 19:09:48
不平行： enhancement 和preparing不平行
773 2015-02-20 17:36:29
be geared toward ：以……为方针。and前后要平行，前面是enhancement，名词，后面是preparing，虽然是动名词可以当名词用，但是在这里确实强调动作的过程，为国际比赛“做好准备”，所以前后不一致了。
773 2015-02-20 17:36:30
be geared toward ：以……为方针。and前后要平行，前面是enhancement，名词，后面是preparing，虽然是动名词可以当名词用，但是在这里确实强调动作的过程，为国际比赛“做好准备”，所以前后不一致了。
瑞雪兆丰年 2016-06-08 20:14:42
Toward the enhancement vs toward preparing them不平行
shijing 2016-02-25 20:05:16
1）the enhancement of athletes' performance累赘 2）toward其实重复了
香蕉小姐 2015-05-26 16:30:53
Parallelism eliminates D. (Geared toward X and Y.)
