Rejecting the apprenticeship model of training social workers in philanthropic agencies, twentieth-century reformer Edith Abbott was convinced of the necessity of social work education being in the university and students could be offered a broad range of courses dealing with social issues.
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考满分老用户 2015-01-29 12:22:12
GMAT一个常见的错误就是把一个完整的概念用一个名词来代替,造成对概念的解释不完整或引起结构的复杂. 这种错误常出现在宾语从句和that引导的同位语从句中: that引导同位语: Scientists find a result that rats will demonstrate some interesting behaviors. 用名词来代替会变成: Scientist find a result of rats that will demonstrate some interesting behaviors. (解释不完全，that修饰rats, 没有对result本身内容做出说明) 或Scientist find a result of rats as demonstrating some interesting behaviors.(结构笨拙,复杂) 宾语从句: …revealed that creatures of the seabed were suffering because food supplies were dwindling… 用名词来代替: …revealed creatures of the seabed that…(解释不完全，that修饰the seabed,没对creatures本身内容 做出说明) …revealed creatures of the seabed’s suffering…(结构笨拙,复杂，只定了creature 的所属属性，没做对本身内容做说明) 解决这两种问题的方法就是谓语动词后用that从句引导句子,简化结构,并能够进行完整的解释
ypheroin 2015-12-08 19:02:06
1. of 的错误 2. 前一句是convinced of，后面的and没有对应的平行结构。
seline_lover 2015-10-28 12:58:17
of结构无法有效地引导convinced的内容,而且of作为介词,不能引导句子,因此was convinced of … and students could…使用错误;and后面的句子没有平行对象。
languagehacker 2016-09-05 22:29:53
GMAT一个常见的错误就是把一个完整的概念用一个名词来代替,造成对概念的解释不完整或引起结构的复杂. 这种错误常出现在宾语从句和that引导的同位语从句中: that引导同位语: Scientists find a result that rats will demonstrate some interesting behaviors. 用名词来代替会变成: Scientist find a result of rats that will demonstrate some interesting behaviors. (解释不完全，that修饰rats, 没有对result本身内容做出说明) 或Scientist find a result of rats as demonstrating some interesting behaviors.(结构笨拙,复杂) 宾语从句: …revealed that creatures of the seabed were suffering because food supplies were dwindling… 用名词来代替: …revealed creatures of the seabed that…(解释不完全，that修饰the seabed,没对creatures本身内容 做出说明) …revealed creatures of the seabed’s suffering…(结构笨拙,复杂，只定了creature 的所属属性，没做对本身内容做说明) 解决这两种问题的方法就是谓语动词后用that从句引导句子,简化结构,并能够进行完整的解释
snow199511 2016-06-23 10:03:03
1. convinced of 2. being in the university, necessity of .... = redundancy
小邹GMAT 2015-09-18 11:24:57
错误！and后面没有平行对象！注意如果前面“动词介词结构”后面出现and可能会导致介词错误！！
pennie 2014-01-10 05:15:41
1.being引领的句子一般是错误的 2.the necessity 名词，比较于D选项中的necessary（adj), 不是最理想的 遵循原则：V-Adj-N
