Nikola Tesla, the inventor of alternating current, because he was excited with the prospects of harnessing Niagara Falls for producing electric power, he predicted in the mid-1890's that electricity generated at Niagara would one day power the streetcars of London and the streetlights of Paris.
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grace麦子1 2015-11-15 18:02:10
把because分句去掉，就变成NT..., he...多主语；excited with搭配不对，应该是excited about
languagehacker 2016-09-05 15:40:50
双主语
hxq1994 2016-01-03 23:54:14
结构 -主句不完整
愤怒的小飞机 2015-12-10 20:06:54
人名后是同位语，然后是原因状语从句，然后是主句，导致这个人名多余，架构混乱 句意：nt这个人因为对用瀑布来发电（目的）这件事很感兴趣，预测了……
phililee 2015-08-17 21:57:31
S，修饰，状语从句，S V +that 从句 缺少谓语动词，
wheat0821 2015-04-14 14:34:15
run-on
XinYueeeer 2014-11-07 15:16:32
he主语重复
lyqsunny 2014-06-24 11:55:05
because 是一个连词，需要找到两套主谓宾与之匹配，但是发现有三个主语，最前面的Nikola Tesla, the inventor of alternating current明显多余，所以错误。
