Unlike most other mergers in the utility industry, which have been driven by the need to save money and extend companies' service areas, the merger of the nation's leading gas and electric company is intended to create a huge marketing network for the utilities in question with states opening their utility markets to competition.
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Leon111 2014-06-13 18:37:46
with引导伴随状语时，放句首或者前面加逗号。A中，with既没有放句首也没有加逗号，所以表示的意思就是“和”，显然不符合句意。
Maggie有颗少女心 2016-04-11 21:28:07
leading gas and electric company错误, 因为一个公司不可能组成merger，应该是gas company and electric company分开写；with短语前面没有逗号时做状语表达的是"与开放公用事业市场的州一同来create a network"，逻辑错误，注意在此with短语不会做定语，因为前面的the utilities in question不可能被with states修饰；opening做states的限定性修饰，表示只有几个州open utility markets，逻辑错误；marketing network表达unidiomatic。
jessicachow 2016-02-05 16:05:32
gas and electric company是一个公司，不存在merger, with表示伴随状语是，前面一定要加逗号。
ChessyG 2016-11-20 03:47:08
a gas and electric comp, is one comp which cannot complete the merger;besides, with +ving without comma 修饰前面的question.
ColdSheldon 2016-10-22 10:26:18
日了狗了 with前不加逗号，还是表示 一起的意思 和开放市场的states 一起创造network 意思不对了
啃GMAT7777 2016-10-17 15:47:05
* "with states opening..." is incorrect. when you have an -ING WITHOUT COMMA modifier, like this one, it's a RESTRICTIVE ("essential") modifier. this means that we're only talking about those states that are "opening their utility markets to competition", the implication being that only some states are doing so. the intended meaning is better conveyed by "as states open..."
yiyi11311 2016-10-15 23:07:34
merger合并要有两个及以上的公司
丶好名字都被取了 2016-10-07 11:39:37
the merger of后面应为两家公司，应补出company在gas后；with错误不是定语修饰而是与states的含义
又是羊 2016-10-04 04:37:55
leading gas and electric company是一个公司同时有gas和electric。 with states opening means that we're only talking about those states that are "opening their utility markets to competition", the implication being that only some states are doing so.
Lottieeee 2016-08-01 16:22:07
gas and electric company會讓人誤以為只有一家公司，同時有gas&electric ，但這裡講的是merger合併，只有一家公司不能合併
瑞雪兆丰年 2016-07-13 11:41:46
leading gas and electric company错误, 因为一个公司不可能组成merger，应该是gas company and electric company分开写；with短语前面没有逗号时做状语表达的是"与开放公用事业市场的州一同来create a network"，逻辑错误，注意在此with短语不会做定语，因为前面的the utilities in question不可能被with states修饰；opening做states的限定性修饰，表示只有几个州open utility markes，逻辑错误；marketing network表达unidiomatic。
LM檬先森。 2016-06-10 20:01:33
考点 指代一致（Agreement）; 逻辑表达（Logical Predication） Unlike sb./sth成分和主语之间可以相隔一个插入语。 选项分析 A. leading gas and electric company错误, 因为一个公司不可能组成merger，应该是gas company and electric company分开写；with短语前面没有逗号时做状语表达的是"与开放公用事业市场的州一同来create a network"，逻辑错误，注意在此with短语不会做定语，因为前面的the utilities in question不可能被with states修饰；opening做states的限定性修饰，表示只有几个州open utility markes，逻辑错误；marketing network表达unidiomatic。
Goooaway 2016-06-07 17:00:53
主语merger排除are只剩下AE leading gas and electric company错误, 因为一个公司不可能组成merger，应该是gas company and electric company分开写；with短语前面没有逗号时做状语表达的是"与开放公用事业市场的州一同来create a network"，逻辑错误，注意在此with短语不会做定语，因为前面的the utilities in question不可能被with states修饰；opening做states的限定性修饰，表示只有几个州open utility markets，逻辑错误；marketing network表达unidiomatic。
