According to recent studies comparing the nutritional value of meat from wild animals and meat from domesticated animals, total fat of wild animals is less than livestock fed on grain and they have more fat of a kind thought to be good for cardiac health.
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SherylLu 2017-12-27 16:41:09
{total fat} of wild animal is less than {livestock} fed on grain，拿total fat 和 livestock比，比较对象错误
Benwant700 2014-09-07 23:52:59
比较对象不对，拿动物和脂肪比了
西西瓜 2014-10-20 19:10:22
这里比错了对象，fat是不能跟livestock构成平行的，虽然意思是fat of wild animals,但也应该是that of livestock才对。很重要。
