Acquiring 828,000 square miles in the Louisiana Purchase of 1803, the United States bought it for about four cents an acre, more than doubling the country's size and bringing its western border within reach of the Pacific Ocean.
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王竹君 2016-01-11 12:01:24
改变原文句子重心， 不忠于原文， 直接杀
Leon111 2014-06-16 20:11:04
) it没有指代对象；acquire与bought同时用，表达不简洁。
wuyuewen1993 2014-04-13 21:35:27
it无指代对象，it逻辑上应该勇于指代Louisiana，但在本句中，前面出现的是Louisiana Purchase
zoecocoon 2017-01-16 07:57:30
"more than doubling the country's size" can't modify "the united states bought it for about four cent..."
Sun_xh720 2016-12-30 02:27:29
it无指代是绝对错误
停不下来的雕兄 2016-12-23 17:19:16
another reason to eliminate choice (e) is the following portion: the United States bought it for about four cents an acre, more than doubling the country's size... this doesn't comport with the use of COMMA -ING modifiers; such modifiers are supposed to have a direct relationship to the previous clause. however, in this answer choice, there is no relationship between the previous clause (which deals with how much the united states paid) and the modifier (which deals with the increase in its size). by contrast, in the correct answer, note that this modifier actually modifies a clause that deals with the size of the purchase. Pueden hacerle preguntas a Ron en c
小揪揪 2016-12-20 12:51:50
(E) it没有指代对象；acquire与bought同时用，表达不简洁。E选项错误使用",+ing"修饰语 念起来乖乖的 A和B有点重复的感觉 C
halowwww 2016-12-15 22:43:13
(from Ron) E option: you have a pronoun shift; you have "it" and "its" in the same clause, but they're trying to refer to different things. that's not acceptable.
das123456 2016-12-14 19:19:00
it 無所指代
WYKMF！ 2016-12-05 11:29:15
the US bought it的it指代对象是什么？？？？根本没有
糯米团子QUQ 2016-11-03 19:31:52
such modifiers are supposed to have a direct relationship to the previous clause. however, in this answer choice, there is no relationship between the previous clause (which deals with how much the united states paid) and the modifier (which deals with the increase in its size).
糯米团子QUQ 2016-11-03 19:30:27
the United States bought it for about four cents an acre, more than doubling the country's size... this doesn't comport with the use of COMMA -ING modifiers; such modifiers are supposed to have a direct relationship to the previous clause. however, in this answer choice, there is no relationship between the previous clause (which deals with how much the united states paid) and the modifier (which deals with the increase in its size). by contrast, in the correct answer, note that this modifier actually modifies a clause that deals with the size of the purchase.
桐桐不要大胖脸 2016-10-27 17:31:41
doing句首修饰没有问题，但是主句上it无指代。 后面的doing修饰也没有问题。
