The computer company's present troubles are a result of technological stagnation, marketing missteps, and managerial blunders that several attempts at revising corporate strategies have failed to correct them
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喵了个叽 2015-06-02 22:56:37
that本身在从句中作宾语 them 多余
Jessicajy 2015-06-07 20:44:29
宾语从句的that在从句中做宾语指代 troubles，them多余
fishanne 2015-12-22 22:55:23
that 和them重复指代， 所以them是多余的
karenning 2016-06-26 09:16:45
" them " redundant -- that already replace " technological stagnation, marketing missteps, and managerial blunders"
fishanne 2015-12-22 23:04:14
attempt at doing 不是idiom . 应该是attempt to do
Garfield11 2015-10-30 11:39:57
them在这里是多余的！that引导的定语从句已经把宾语给出来了
ClaireXu 2015-10-17 09:40:34
them多余，that是形式宾语。attempt TODO
晴天157雨天 2014-08-13 18:00:10
Them多余
