Deliberately imitating the technique of Louis Armstrong, jazz singer Billie Holiday approached singing by using her voice like other musicians instruments, ranging freely over the beat, flattening out the melodic contours of tunes, and, in effect, recomposed songs to suit her range, style, and artistic sensibilities.
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香蕉小姐 2015-05-11 13:52:59
首先意思不对，like other musicians instruments是什么鬼。其次，recomposed这里和approached平行的话，那么using，ranging和flattening也应该平行，那么flattening前面少一个and。
huhu388 2015-04-16 19:02:28
approach like instrument no sense !
Aphasia21 2014-08-03 16:07:29
没有和recomposed平行的句子。。
要考满分的晚琳儿 2016-10-22 16:03:05
1、选项里的like前后不对应 2、recomposed和approached平行，那么三个ing平行的话，最后一个flattening前应加and
queenkat 2016-10-16 21:35:16
like前后不平行 ranging 和flattening没有连词
yaomaczhang 2016-09-28 00:50:40
like other musicians' instruments Recomposed 不平行
yaomaczhang 2016-09-28 00:50:38
like other musicians' instruments Recomposed 不平行
shisu0610041 2016-09-11 19:09:24
CDE里选。。但是recomposed和其他Ving的都不平行。。。。只能差中选优了！！暂且忽略in that的问题
huiminzi1124 2016-05-27 14:15:26
未划线部分，有 and ... recomposed... 所以要求前面有平行结构。。 如果recomposed 和 approached 平行，那么by using... , ranging, flattening 也要求平行，后三项缺少 and 链接。所以错误
luckybird 2016-05-20 19:23:57
approached singing用法很奇怪且应该为musicians' instruments否则句子结构说不通
Egoyiyy 2016-04-16 10:29:04
using，ranging和flattening也应该平行，那么flattening前面少一个and。
siasiasia 2016-04-10 11:15:24
and 平行错误
Ivycoco 2016-03-21 06:40:21
using，ranging和flattening应该平行，flattening前面少一个and。
