Both the Federal Reserve's decision that borrowing rates be raised and investors' speculation of possibly another increase on the way helped to bolster the dollar in recent weeks because they made deposits more attractive.
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huiminzi1124 2016-05-26 15:55:44
they指代不清，rate的被动语态也不如主动好
Deprofundis 2014-07-10 15:05:54
that borrowing rates be raised ，相对于其它的主动语气，这里的被动语气不是很好，因为其发出者是知道的，这样的表达就比较罗嗦。 speculation就是推测的意思，和possibly意思重复了。
lanyuer 2015-09-19 11:47:16
they指代不清，rate的被动语态也不如主动好
davisuperman 2016-12-10 13:12:25
because they made里面的they指代不清
qwertyuo 2016-12-08 18:48:56
be raised 被动语态不优选
不考到730誓不罢休的小星星 2016-10-06 20:55:57
decide decision 没有命令语气， because强加因果，这里没有很强的因果逻辑 they指代不清
liqijie3242656 2014-11-01 11:19:43
they指代不清，rate的被动语态也不如主动好
