According to some analysts, the gains in the stock market reflect growing confidence that the economy will avoid the recession that was feared earlier this year by many, with it instead coming in for a "soft landing," followed by a gradual increase in business activity.
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Missboli 2015-08-31 06:41:25
被动不如主动好 with it instead coming wordy it指代不清
xmhlf 2015-03-21 10:35:56
with改变原来并列的意思
思璇 2014-12-02 21:11:35
The passive voice construction that was feared … is weak and wordy; with it instead coming is awkward, wordy, and ungrammatical.
Cwowo 2016-10-26 23:09:17
avoid与coming不平行 was feared 时态不对 with将平行改成了伴随，改变了意思
Cwowo 2016-10-26 23:09:16
avoid与coming不平行 was feared 时态不对 with将平行改成了伴随，改变了意思
francescao 2016-09-09 21:03:23
it 指代什么？
snow199511 2016-06-07 10:40:10
with it instead coming is awkward, wordy, and ungrammatical.
annie654 2016-05-06 10:50:22
定语从句不要出现被动！
hoper 2016-03-24 17:23:11
that从句中出现了被动语态，缀余。不如主动时态或过去分词短语。。。。 with用法把平行结构改成了伴随状语。it指代不清
FreyaDoubles 2016-03-12 18:58:48
看着你就很不顺眼。。
Egoyiyy 2016-03-04 15:30:12
The passive voice construction that was feared … is weak and wordy; with it instead coming is awkward, wordy, and ungrammatical.
nova1022 2015-12-15 15:05:07
coming应该是come
Heyiii 2015-09-10 11:41:06
with it instead coming....is awkward and wordy。 that was feared ... is wordy.
