Heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved from the previous year, only look less appetizing than their round and red supermarket cousins; they are often green and striped, or have plenty of bumps and bruises, but they are more flavorful.
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seacychen 2015-02-27 13:48:40
划线前有their, 指代HT, 所以后面的they都应指代HT, 无指代不清的问题; they are...or have...., but they are并列；难题里有分号的选项正确率高。【分号后面的代词：没有就近这一说，优先指代主语】【分号前面有两个复数名词，分号后可以用they---->指代主语】a pronoun after a semicolon can refer to an antecedent before the semicolon; in fact, this is one of the most common uses of a semicolon on the GMAT. if you see a semicolon, see if there is a pronoun after it that refers to something in the first half. in this case, "they" refers to "heirloom tomatoes"..
xiaowen1221 2015-03-04 09:17:54
考点：句法结构，逻辑论元，符合连接词。 （1）逻辑论元：根据语义，这个often green and striped肯定要么修饰heirloom tamatoes，要么修饰他们的cousin。因为前面已经说了他们的cousin是red，所以这个green and striped是修饰主语的。 有许多淤青和肿块，但更可口，这一部分也是修饰heirloom tomatoes的，因为语境中说了heirlooom tomato只是看起来没有cousin有食欲(但是其实更可口)。 （2）句法结构，根据（1）已经可以判断划线部分的逻辑主语了。根据语法，ABC中的划线部分的逻辑主语模糊不清，不能修饰主句主语。排除ABC。 （3）符合连接词：although表让步，重点在绿色，条纹，淤青，肿块。but表转折，重点在好吃可口flavorful。D改变划线部分意思，使之与语境only look less appetizing than their cousins不符。这样语义不合逻辑。排除D。
不考到730誓不罢休的小星星 2016-09-30 12:29:20
句意上，由于their round and red supermarket cousins与后面的描述相反，则后半句是对 Heirloom tomatoes 的修饰，因此用；连接两个相关的句子是很适合的，如果用逗号连接，很容易引起歧义。 句中出现 多次代词their, they,they，均指代同一tomatoes 正确
huiminzi1124 2016-05-24 16:59:20
A.often green..不知是讲HT还是supermaket cousins。or前后不一致。 B.同A第一处错误。although后面要跟句子，不能作并列连词。 C.两处错误同A. D.or前后不一致。although 后面要用句子。 E.正确。
mm1206 2016-05-16 19:53:06
划线前有their, 指代HT, 所以后面的they都应指代HT, 无指代不清的问题; they are...or have...., but they are并列；难题里有分号的选项正确率高。【分号后面的代词：没有就近这一说，优先指代主语】【分号前面有两个复数名词，分号后可以用they---->指代主语】a pronoun after a semicolon can refer to an antecedent before the semicolon; in fact, this is one of the most common uses of a semicolon on the GMAT. if you see a semicolon, see if there is a pronoun after it that refers to something in the first half. in this case, "they" refers to "heirloom tomatoes"..
mm1206 2016-05-16 19:53:06
划线前有their, 指代HT, 所以后面的they都应指代HT, 无指代不清的问题; they are...or have...., but they are并列；难题里有分号的选项正确率高。【分号后面的代词：没有就近这一说，优先指代主语】【分号前面有两个复数名词，分号后可以用they---->指代主语】a pronoun after a semicolon can refer to an antecedent before the semicolon; in fact, this is one of the most common uses of a semicolon on the GMAT. if you see a semicolon, see if there is a pronoun after it that refers to something in the first half. in this case, "they" refers to "heirloom tomatoes"..
Susie_yan 2015-10-12 11:36:59
虽然觉的E有点儿啰嗦 单对比后是最优选项
T100G700 2015-10-08 17:48:41
用分号分成两句看起来很清晰。一句话出现两个they are指代相同的内容，虽然不简洁但是不一定不对——concise只是有效性错误不是绝对性错误不能eliminate/
old4gaming 2015-10-03 00:03:48
green and striped是修饰 heirloom tomatoes的，they优先指代前句主语
old4gaming 2015-09-13 20:30:58
划线前有their，they的指代没有问题
jdsha11 2015-08-18 11:19:49
本句话是H tomatoes 与 S tomatoes 的比较。划线部分描述的应该是H tomatoes，所以使用分句，因为分句表并列，主语一致，所以they在这里指代H tomatoes
lauchiuyee 2015-08-16 14:33:50
【做错】从句意看they are...修饰的是heirloom tomatoes，ABC杀；although为连词，后接句子/or with结构不好，D杀
