A New York City ordinance of 1897 regulating the use of bicycles, mandating a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, requiring of cyclists that they keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and granted pedestrians right-of-way.
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songzy3411 2015-03-14 20:27:20
regulating与mandating，requiring并列逻辑意思不合理，就算并列，requiring前应该加and；如果regulating 与mandating，requiring，grant并列，grant应改为granting；如果四个动词并列，该句子就缺乏谓语动词。
