A mixture of poems and short fiction, Jean Toomer's Cane has been called one of the three best novels ever written by Black Americans-including Native Son by Richard Wright and Invisible Man by Ralph Ellison.
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JulianLoveGmat 2014-07-28 23:22:36
句子主语是jean toomer‘s cane， 破折号后including有表示主语包括后面这两种书的歧义。 破折号后与前半句不平行
liqijie3242656 2014-07-30 15:53:57
对象虽然平行但是格式不平行，未划线部分用的是所有格形式，后面也该用所有格形式
Aphasia21 2014-08-13 17:10:16
Jean Toomer's Cane和Native Son by Richard Wright 不够对称
vigari 2017-01-01 22:18:49
主语是Cane，就变成Cane include
anni9364 2016-10-24 23:47:54
Jean Toomer's Cane和Native Son by Richard Wright 不够对称
ColdSheldon 2016-10-12 11:17:28
语法没问题，错在dicition 不优于e E里遵循了为划线部分的的平行 讲真我做题时也没发现，功力不够 (b) is not as parallel as (e), either. since the original says "jean toomer's cane", the others should also have the form "X's Y", not "Y by X". word choice is a sticky thing. for instance, it's actually better to say "birds have a four-chambered heart" than to say "birds have four-chambered hearts", because the former makes it clear that each bird has exactly 1 heart. b
zeonhin 2016-10-06 19:55:48
书by人和人所有格书并不平行
取个名字太麻烦 2016-09-29 22:21:40
对象虽然平行但是格式不平行，未划线部分用的是所有格形式，后面也该用所有格形式。
LaraNg 2016-09-22 17:49:38
being+n.不一定错。本题破折号后可以还原为句子：The others are RW’s NS and RE’s IM. 2. 关于用Black Americans还是用a Black American：日常写作中用Black Americans和a Black American都可以，逻辑和语法都没有问题，GMAT家似乎倾向于使用后者，更加清晰指出一本书是一个人写。
shisu0610041 2016-09-10 21:16:34
句子主语是jean toomer‘s cane， 破折号后including有表示主语包括后面这两种书的歧义。
陈阳红 2016-09-05 21:29:59
重点不在单复数，不够平行，所有格与所有格平行，
陈艺蛋蛋蛋 2016-07-29 11:01:18
对象虽然平行但是格式不平行，未划线部分用的是所有格形式，后面也该用所有格形式；前面已经说了三本中的其中一本，后面用the others可以表示出跟上文的联系，比including本身要好很多
ocean09960802 2016-05-23 15:43:16
Jean Toomer's Cane和Native Son by Richard Wright 不够对称
