While the rate of mainstream American businesses failing is more than half, the failure rate for businesses in the Amish community hovers around 5 percent.
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Leon111 2014-06-21 21:02:04
D中2个错误：1.of+N.+ving结构再gmat中是错；2：the rate is half错误，只能说the rate is 50%
lenka0monica 2014-07-18 13:48:21
不要就顾着看形式上的平行！！！ noun of +verbing这个结构表达的模糊性，强调的是noun 而此处句意强调的是fail
siasiasia 2016-04-09 11:51:34
rate of sb doing 错误；failing完全可以用failure
qwertyuo 2016-12-21 13:38:43
of+名词+Ving 全错！！
小揪揪 2016-12-20 22:37:46
noun of +verbing这个结构表达的模糊性
zjy1121 2016-12-18 21:59:33
the n of V-ing 是错的
ColdSheldon 2016-11-07 15:21:54
prep noun v-ing v-ing去掉后若句意重心改变了，就说明这个机构是不优的（语意模糊）
Candicelala 2016-10-28 06:00:17
好题！形式上和句意上更侧重于句意 n of doing 强调n 但是E选项强调的是动作 fail 更符合句意
麦兜770 2016-10-06 10:52:35
the major problem with (d) is the incorrect construction "of + NOUN + VERBing". also, it's unidiomatic to say that a RATE is "half" (or "more/less than half"). you could say that a rate is 50%, but not "half". by ron with (d)
麦兜770 2016-10-06 10:52:34
the major problem with (d) is the incorrect construction "of + NOUN + VERBing". also, it's unidiomatic to say that a RATE is "half" (or "more/less than half"). you could say that a rate is 50%, but not "half". by ron with (d)
麦兜770 2016-10-06 10:52:33
the major problem with (d) is the incorrect construction "of + NOUN + VERBing". also, it's unidiomatic to say that a RATE is "half" (or "more/less than half"). you could say that a rate is 50%, but not "half". by ron with (d)
yaomaczhang 2016-09-26 02:41:44
while不需要完全对称。rate of failing不对
不考到730誓不罢休的小星星 2016-09-17 15:22:56
语意错误，原文是想比较失败企业的比例、比率，而非企业失败的速度（rate/speed）
