Laos has a land area of about the same size as Great Britain is, but in Laos there is a population of only four million, and many are members of hill tribes ensconced in the virtually inaccessible mountain valleys of the north.
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打败lcy 2014-08-25 16:47:21
比较错误，同时there is赘余。
sissi199005 2014-12-02 22:43:47
Britain后面的is和前面的has不对称，而且land area是土地面积的意思，与size的意思有点重复
亦又制造 2014-09-29 14:37:41
两个东西进行比较。中间用了个the same size as应该要考虑平行，前面的Laos用的是has ，后面的Great Britain用的是is，这就是明显的不平衡
zzv 2016-08-16 17:29:27
many指的是land，错误
bonbonusagi 2016-06-28 14:40:10
has 和 is不平行；size和land area重复；and many割裂了many 和前一句句子的关系
snow199511 2016-06-07 10:03:21
1. a land area of about same as G B's (area) 2. there is = redundant
annie654 2016-05-06 09:57:15
is与has比较不一致 少用there be 句型
katritina 2016-04-19 08:03:01
is and has are不平行
katritina 2016-04-19 08:02:59
is and has are不平行
Egoyiyy 2016-03-04 15:10:54
has和is 不对。 and many没有指代对象。
企鹅咧 2016-02-15 11:07:22
Lao has a land area of the same size as GB area 才能比较 and many 不明确指代对象
LLLLLLybh 2016-02-01 00:44:18
Great Britain is表达方式不对。 and many 没有指代对象
海芮 2016-01-23 12:27:04
注意 Britaion后面的 is 容易忽略
