In 1995 Richard Stallman, a well-known critic of the patent system, testified in Patent Office hearings that, to test the system, a colleague of his had managed to win a patent for one of Kirchhoff's laws that was an observation about electric current, first made in 1845, and is now included in virtually every textbook of elementary physics.
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ccorange2004 2014-01-10 01:58:23
one of Kirchhoff's laws that... should use plural. If we use "the" one of Kirchhoff's laws should use singular.
san_dra_1994 2015-09-11 10:14:55
that从句修饰laws，不应该用was
Kimi爱学习 2015-07-23 17:18:22
同位语修饰大于定语修饰，能用词组就不用句子。 that 引导定语从句修饰laws，不应该用was
搞不死就往死里搞 2020-03-18 03:44:48
(E) laws that was an observation about electric current, first made in 1845, and is --> Modifier Problem. Sounds like current was made in 1865
Seech 2016-12-27 11:21:43
E的错误有很多，第一，laws that was主谓不一致，这里that如果要修饰只能修饰laws。第二，这里的included不是动词而是定语，如果作为动词 is included就要跟前面的had managed平行，那么时态又错了。
laurennnn 2016-10-29 07:42:17
that was累赘，first made和is included不平行
Kakamolo0808 2016-10-08 15:21:45
that就近修饰laws ，从句谓语动词不应该用was
meiyouyhm 2016-09-20 16:50:35
that修饰laws，后面怎么跟was呢
踏实聪明狗 2016-09-11 14:37:11
that引导定语从句修饰laws, 单数was错误
跳跳爸爸 2016-08-11 20:47:03
不应该用was
lovehideto 2016-07-22 06:05:30
1. 此处that定语从句存在修饰歧义，一般来说one of sth that结构，that修饰sth而不是one，所以意思扭曲。三个定语不平行，前后两个有谓语动词，中间的first made没有谓语动词
Kieren 2016-07-13 14:00:39
that定语从句就近原则修饰laws而不是one of laws
snow199511 2016-06-05 20:40:13
1. 此处that定语从句存在修饰歧义，一般来说one of sth that结构，that修饰sth而不是one，所以意思扭曲。 2. Parrallelism: that was an observation...., first made.... and now included; Or, that was an observation...., was first made and is now included
