Although heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year, appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins—they are often green and striped, or have plenty of bumps and bruises—heirlooms are more flavorful and thus in increasing demand.
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ritarong 2015-03-18 22:47:18
首先，划线句子的最后部分必须是B、D项，才能跟上后面破折号的解释。即必须是描述h tomatoes外貌的。 再看B、D。D项缩减为 h tomatoes appear less appetizing，h are more flavorful….. 明显是两个独立的句子，缺少了连词。 加上B项的although，整个就正确了。 引用回复55楼
ztg591 2016-05-31 20:07:11
The intended meaning could be communicated more effectively by mentioning heirloom tomatoes as early as possible in the sentence, so that we know that the writer is comparing heirloom tomatoes with supermarket tomatoes.ACE都不是完整结构 D没有转折连词
kristy16s 2016-05-14 08:19:53
原来although后接完整句，句子主谓是可以断开的 =。=
Maxim712 2017-08-31 20:43:05
很明显 破折号+they是在对前面紧贴的内容进行进一步的解释，而这部分内容是描述H番茄的样子的，显然破折号前面也是在讲番茄的样子（通过这个可以确定划线句个成分的排列顺序）
勋达令 2017-01-09 18:29:35
h tomatoes出现的很早
jackshanhang 2016-10-22 01:55:17
This passage is testing sentence structure, construction and style A. Although appearing less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins, heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year-------In this simple sentence, introduced by a participial modifier, the modified subject heirloom tomatoes is repeated twice and hence redundant. B Although heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year, appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins—avoids mentioning heirloom tomatoes in the underlined portions and thus escapes redundancy ------ correct choice C Although they appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins, heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year- same redundancy as in A D Grown from seeds saved during the previous year, heirloom tomatoes appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins. ---------- The two ICs forming the compound sentence are not conjugated with the conjunction and hence is a run-on E Heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year, although they appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins---In this complex sentence with an early subordinate clause and a following major clause , redundancy of heirloom tomatoes is a problem as in A and C
稳定的玉米投手 2016-06-14 11:05:31
From OG explanation: The intended meaning could be communicated more effectively by mentioning heirloom tomatoes as early as possible in the sentence, so that we know that the writer is comparing heirloom tomatoes with supermarket tomatoes. d项失去了句子重心
gjf1995315 2016-06-03 16:16:36
由句意来看，应该是存在一个转折，所以开头要有一个although，然后A，没有谓语，C中主要后半句的那个heirloom tomatoes，这个东西后面没有接谓语，而画线后面的部分用了they，
huiminzi1124 2016-05-17 15:12:01
B项正确，although H tomato，grown部分做修饰主语，apper部分做谓语表达不好看含义，they are 部分做H tomato不好看的补充说明。 首先，划线句子的最后部分必须是B、D项，才能跟上后面破折号的解释。即必须是描述h tomatoes外貌的。 再看B、D。D项缩减为 h tomatoes appear less appetizing，h are more flavorful….. 明显是两个独立的句子，缺少了连词。 加上B项的although，整个就正确了。 引用回复55楼
huiminzi1124 2016-04-27 17:04:00
B项正确，although H tomato，grown部分做修饰主语，apper部分做谓语表达不好看含义，they are 部分做H tomato不好看的补充说明。
hiafami 2016-03-30 13:53:18
首先，划线句子的最后部分必须是B、D项，才能跟上后面破折号的解释。即必须是描述h tomatoes外貌的。 再看B、D。D项缩减为 h tomatoes appear less appetizing，h are more flavorful….. 明显是两个独立的句子，缺少了连词。 加上B项的although，整个就正确了
