Although many new restaurants have recently been opened across the country and its sales increased dramatically, the restaurant company's sales at restaurants open for more than a year have declined.
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纯洁小吹吹吹 2016-02-27 13:26:29
句意不清
纯洁小吹吹吹 2016-02-27 13:26:30
句意不清
思璇 2014-12-17 21:39:35
its指代不清，动作发出者模糊
不考到730誓不罢休的小星星 2016-09-07 17:17:38
its指代模糊
Ines要上700 2016-04-03 21:48:15
its指代模糊；many new restaurants have recently been opened没有体现出动作的发出者，使得句意含糊。
Jenny_Feng 2016-03-12 17:19:45
it肯定指代前面的，没有能够指代的
Jenny_Feng 2016-03-12 17:19:41
it肯定指代前面的，没有能够指代的
大喵 2015-11-10 00:03:28
1. 被动不简洁，open的发出者不明 2. its指代不明
veravane 2015-10-14 13:04:26
and 前后的时态不平行 open的主语缺失 没有说明new restaurant 与restaurant company 的关系
shisu0610041 2015-09-07 11:35:26
也不能看到同位语出现就选，陷入思维定式； 这里的it's就存在指代不清的问题
olivezcy 2015-08-01 21:23:34
用被动“opened”不合适
