Not one of the potential investors is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement be signed by them with a provision for penalties if the deal were not to be concluded.
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ztg591 2016-07-25 15:06:53
them用法比较不好，这些人都是潜在投资者，只要一个人买了就可以，不应该用复数。 Be signed不合理 with a provision改变句意
liqijie3242656 2014-07-29 14:42:16
be signed时态错误，them无所指，with a provision错误修饰be signed,需要一个条例来规范签订这个动作
CyndiaLee 2015-04-14 10:32:10
BE signed by THEM WITH ×
summersummerfun 2016-08-02 17:23:34
until 后的时态不对，them指代不清，
manifest 2016-03-03 23:57:37
them错误
海蓝新雨 2015-08-07 19:14:43
them没有指代对象
stephanie0809 2015-02-25 19:22:45
be signed时态错误；with a provision修饰be signed，意思成了需要一个条例来规范签署这一动作；Them无指代。
nicolexzs 2014-10-24 19:14:03
be signed时态错误；with a provision修饰be signed，意思成了需要一个条例来规范签署这一动作；them无指代。
Leon111 2014-08-14 18:26:07
问题有几个：1）这个be以原型出现很奇怪 2）这样用with引导provision，那就说明这是agreement以外的另外一个东西了 3）them用法比较不好，这些人都是潜在投资者，只要一个人买了就可以，不应该用复数。
