The greatest road system built in the Americas prior to the arrival of Christopher Columbus, the Incan highway, being over 2,500 miles in length, was extended from northern Ecuador through Peru to Southern Chile.
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Yeezy 2014-08-02 21:01:59
being使用wordy；in length不如long简洁；was extended变成和was the Incan highway平行，结构不合理，且was extended被动使用不当。
old4gaming 2015-08-31 14:56:29
being累赘了，was extended被动不合适
JulianLoveGmat 2014-07-26 17:19:39
being在这里wordy in length没有long用法简洁 was extended被动使用不当
取个名字太麻烦 2016-09-28 12:11:55
being在这里wordy in length没有long用法简洁 was extended被动使用不当。
LM檬先森。 2016-06-10 19:51:35
D) being使用wordy；in length不如long简洁；was extended变成和was the Incan highway平行，结构不合理，且was extended被动使用不当。
飞越马德里 2014-07-21 22:47:25
being不好
