According to a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition was concentrated in a metal center, but now it is lined with lead around the perimeter, thereby improving stability in flight and resulting in longer throws.
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lkid 2015-10-11 16:04:45
it指代weight of the discus错误 According to改变了原文的逻辑意思，原文不是想说根据，只是陈述客观事实 according to后面接具体内容！！！如果单说是根据什么什么法规，就要用in accordance with。
许大别扭 2014-04-09 11:39:10
it指代问题， According to改变了原文的逻辑意思，原文不是想说根据，只是陈述客观事实。
asd8176 2014-10-14 22:06:23
(B) it指代问题，同A； According to改变了原文的逻辑意思，原文不是想说根据，只是陈述客观事实。
siasiasia 2016-04-09 16:12:27
but 后面的it指代了weight 错误
BobZ 2015-12-19 14:10:51
According to改变了原文的逻辑意思，原文不是想说根据，只是陈述客观事实。
charlene123456 2015-10-18 17:20:51
it 指代有问题， according to 原文不是说根据设计，同时 according to 后跟具体内容
LynnWei 2014-10-16 18:48:47
the weight of the discus 應使用所有格 its 不是it According to 改變句意
asd8176 2014-10-09 15:10:15
it指代weight of the discus错误；
王eee_q 2014-08-11 12:54:26
1. it指代the weight of ..不对 2 according给句子增加了意思，不对
liqijie3242656 2014-08-09 18:22:57
improving stability,逻辑上主语不应该为the weight
liqijie3242656 2014-08-09 18:09:16
line with lead,逻辑上主语不应该为the weight
